The internal assessment: portfolio of commentaries
🎯What this page covers
- The portfolio rules: articles, units, sources, dates, word limit and what counts towards it.
- The nine key concepts and how to use one as a “lens”.
- The six assessment criteria (A–F), in plain language.
- A step-by-step method and a worked commentary plan.
📚The requirements
one on each of Unit 2 (microeconomics), Unit 3 (macroeconomics) and Unit 4 (the global economy). Unit 1 cannot be used.
moderators stop reading at 800 words.
14 marks per commentary (criteria A–E) × 3 = 42, plus 3 marks for the whole portfolio (criterion F).
The articles:
- From a newspaper, journal or the internet; not from television or radio.
- Published no earlier than one year before you write the commentary.
- Each from a different source (three different publications).
- You choose them yourself; the teacher cannot hand an article to the class. Commentaries are individual work.
- Short articles are best; if an article is long, highlight the section you are commenting on. If the article is in another language, include an accurate translation of the whole article and the original.
On each commentary record: the article’s title, source (with date of access for web sources), date of publication, date the commentary was written, word count, the unit of the syllabus, and the key concept used.
Not included in the word count: acknowledgments, contents page, diagrams, labels of five words or fewer, diagram headings of ten words or fewer, tables of statistics, equations, formulae and calculations, citations in the body, and references in footnotes or endnotes. Included: definitions and quotations in the body. Footnotes may only be used for references.
Your teacher can read one draft of each commentary and give advice, but cannot edit it. The next version is the final one.
The nine key concepts
Each commentary must use a different key concept as the lens through which you analyse the article. Using the same concept twice costs up to 3 marks on criterion D; three times, up to 6.
Choose the concept that genuinely fits the article, and build the whole commentary around it, not a sentence at the end. For example, an article on a fuel subsidy cut might be read through equity (who bears the cost?), efficiency (does the subsidy cause overconsumption?) or intervention (should the government set fuel prices?). See 1.1 for the concepts.
The assessment criteria (in plain language)
Relevant diagrams that are accurate and correctly labelled, and fully explained in the text with reference to the article. An unexplained diagram scores low however neat it is.
Economic terms relevant to the article used appropriately throughout, not just defined once.
Relevant theory applied to the article throughout, with effective analysis: why and how things happen, linked to the facts in the article.
A key concept is identified and its link to the article fully explained. Zero if it repeats a concept from another commentary.
Judgments supported by effective and balanced reasoning: consequences for stakeholders, short versus long run, assumptions, alternatives, and a conclusion.
One mark for each: every article from a different unit; every article from a different and appropriate source; every article published no more than a year before the commentary was written.
A method that works
- Find the article. Look for a short, recent news story about one clear economic event or policy: a tax, a price change, a central bank decision, a tariff, an exchange rate move. Opinion pieces with no facts are hard to use; long reports are hard to cover in 800 words.
- Identify the theory that explains it (usually one main diagram, sometimes two) and the key concept that best fits.
- Plan about 800 words: introduction and definitions (~100), theory and diagram(s) applied to the article (~350), key concept woven through, evaluation (~300), conclusion (~50).
- Draw the diagram with real labels from the article (the actual market, the actual tax) and explain every shift in the text.
- Evaluate using the article’s facts: who gains and loses, what could go wrong, what else could be done.
- Check the rubric: dates, sources, units, concepts, word count, cover information.
✏️Worked commentary plan
Unit: 2, microeconomics (market for tourism services; government intervention). Key concept: sustainability. (Alternatives: intervention, equity.)
Introduction (~100 words): summarize the article’s facts (the levy, its size, what the revenue is for). Define a per-unit indirect tax, externalities and sustainability.
Theory and diagrams (~350 words):
- Diagram 1: the levy as a per-visitor tax: supply of tourism services shifts up by the levy; price paid by visitors rises; number of visits falls; revenue rectangle (2.7).
- Diagram 2: mass tourism causes negative externalities of consumption (waste, water use, congestion, damage to reefs and cultural sites); MSB below MPB; overconsumption; the levy moves visits towards the social optimum, and the earmarked revenue funds clean-up (2.8).
- Link each step to the article (quotes, figures) and to sustainability: preserving the natural and cultural resources the industry depends on for future generations; beaches and reefs as common pool resources.
Evaluation (~300 words): demand for a long-haul holiday is likely price inelastic for a small levy relative to the total trip cost, so arrivals may fall only slightly (little effect on behaviour, but good revenue); impact on stakeholders (hotels, guides, visitors, local residents, the provincial government); whether the revenue is actually spent on sustainability (governance, transparency); collection problems and evasion; alternatives (regulation of development, visitor caps at sensitive sites, education); short run versus long run.
Conclusion (~50 words): a judgment on whether the levy is likely to make tourism more sustainable, and under what conditions.
📝Checklist questions
Use these on each draft.
1. My article is 14 months old but very relevant. Can I use it?
2. Two of my articles are from the same newspaper but different sections. Is that allowed?
3. Do my diagrams count towards the 800 words?
4. Can I use “intervention” in two commentaries if they are about different policies?
5. How many diagrams should a commentary have?
6. My article is an opinion column arguing for a policy. Is that a problem?
🔗Go deeper — other people’s work
These are external resources, not mine. If one stops working, tell me and everything above it on this page still stands.
- Your teacher and the IB’s Economics guide — the full criteria and the teacher support material.
- Reuters, the Jakarta Post, The Guardian, Bloomberg and the BBC News website — reliable, dated online sources.
- Google News with date filters — to check that an article is within the one-year limit.